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H​‌‍‍‍‌‍‌‍‍‍‌‌‌‍‌‌‌‌‌‌​ello,
I have attached the feedback with my supervisor comments. In addition he wrote this:
This is a good version but needs some more work.

I have made some track changes but you need to change the relevant parts of the chapter into the paste tense. This is because the reader is reading the work after you have completed it.

Also, for me, it lacks clarity. You have a lot of good relevant material but some of it is lost. What I mean by that is that there is too much surrounding text and so I have to disentangle what you are trying to say. Can I suggest that you use more sub-heading so that it makes it easier to flow.

Remember what the panel said, you need to report the chapte​‌‍‍‍‌‍‌‍‍‍‌‌‌‍‌‌‌‌‌‌​r in terms of how it is used – not a long list of what can be done. For example, a CFA is used in a two-approach and you do that with AMOS. But if you use PLS-SEM there is no two-step and you have different stats.

For the repeat PRP at the least I would expect to see the Cronbach Alphas for each construct and if PLS-SEM then at the least the model and output. Certainly, by the day of the presentation.

You also need to be clear about saying a sample of 387 participants will be achieved. Also, Qualtrics is not a tool – it is a research company. They send the survey to loads of people and get them to complete it to achieve the desired sample rate.

I hope the above and attached ​‌‍‍‍‌‍‌‍‍‍‌‌‌‍‌‌‌‌‌‌​help.

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