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Even though there are multiple pages that needs correcting it only commented areas. Use the following directions to make corrections. Please highlight all changes so that I can easily review them.
Pages address are the numbers in the top right corner.
Page 3- Add a sentence that states why it justify the study this does not have to be cited.
Make changes to the deficiencies of evidence so that it reads more clear. (add what is missing that has not been done yet)
***Be sure not to use and more information from Eriks-Brophy/Whittingham for references
Page 5- Reword the first sentence in the purpose of study. Please keep the information the same but so that it flow better.
Page 7- Add 2 more sentences to the Approaches section
Please remember to highlight any changes that are made. If new resources are used please add them to the reference page